Score: 0

"Not the worst ever, just do something better..."

submission: American Pie

date: September 18, 2007

You obviously have the skills to do a pretty super animation, just put a little more thought into your next one, and perhaps branch out from the whole Clock parody / ripoff. Otherwise, the animation itself wasn't really all that bad...

Score: 1

"I don't care if it's a parody, it's a lazy excuse"

submission: Naruto is the you?

date: February 19, 2007

Well, in fairness, this was terrible. Just terrible. Did that take you a good 30, 35 minutes? The artwork was poor, and the spelling was absolutely atrocious. You would think a 9 year old was enlisted to write this thing out for you! If this was meant to be a parody of all other bad Naruto flashes, it was an awful one; the angle was just too shallow. Instead of coming off funny and appealing, it was just as bad as many other flashes that you were trying to parody, thus leaving your animation poorly lacking in humour.

All in all, try harder next time. Not all parodies are funny; this is good proof.

Score: 8

"A near-perfect summary of every emo I know..."

submission: An Emo's Tale

date: October 25, 2006

Ignore the other guy - emos never do understand what an emo is (quite the irony). It did have some slight goth elements, but overall emos do wallow in self-pity and constantly moan about how they want to die.

And the ending had me in stitches too - mainly because I totally agree!

Nice work - why not also try a chav animation, everyone loves their culture too...

Score: 7

"Superb for a first shot!"

submission: Rayman Raving Rabbids:War

date: October 25, 2006

That was 100,000 times better than most people's "first submissions", which are normally an image or a really bad stickman animation. That looked pretty damn cool, the drawings were great too. Make a longer animation with a proper storyline and I'll be the first to watch it.

Score: 0

"err . . . ."

submission: Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 01

date: June 1, 2006

No offence, but that was really poor. A couple of images and a song certainly don't make a winning Flash animation. Try making Hitler actually move, as it would be much more entertaining.

And don't even bother responding to this calling it 'abusive'. I have read much worse, and this is contructive criticism to a certain degree. Just because somebody criticises your animation it sure as hell doesn't make it abusive. No doubt this'll get plenty of abusive reviews, but I'll restrain myself . . . .

. . . . .this time.

Score: 5

"Not the worst ever . . ."

submission: Lays the Cactus

date: May 30, 2006

Ignore the other idiot calling you a 'fag'. It was a decent animation, but more lip syncing, effort spent and proper voice acting would make it a hell of a lot better.

Oh yeah, and a new storyline. And new characters.

Ah, what the hell. You can obviously animate, just have a rethink and make something better!

Score: 9

"......wow.......just wow......."

submission: Forest

date: May 29, 2006

It's people like you that I want to emulate. That was brilliant. One of the best I've seen in, well, months! The drawing style, the animation, just sheer class.

Score: 5

"Not bad, not bad at all . . ."

submission: desertfight/teaser

date: May 29, 2006

For someone who's quite new to Flash, that was pretty impressive, and the drawing style was great - almost makes me wish I could draw! The tempo just needs to be increased and the storyline should be developed more.

Oh yeah, sound is pretty essential too. Keep up the hard work!

Score: 7

"Yeah, very nice"

submission: End of the Tyrant

date: April 5, 2006

Loved the sound clip from Training Day - used very well indeed. Good flash, even if it was a little short.

Score: 9

"Fantastic!!!"

submission: Punt a Penguin

date: February 2, 2006

What I thought was gonna be a hilarious penguin-ridiculing animation turned out to be a real eye-opener. Great drawing style, too! More please!!